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File Description |
| McCloudDash91 |
Posted on 08/19/06 @ 03:32 PM
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1 [more to come] |
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Moderate |
This is the first level of my newest campaign "Honor of a Samurai". It takes place in feudal Japan, where you are a Samurai who finds out that the Mongols have indeed begun their assault on Japan, and they have a base camp somewhere near your old town. You must do everything in your power to prevent the attack before it even starts, while picking up some strong reinforcements along the way. Hope you enjoy, expect the full campaign in a few weeks tops :) |
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| Dark_Avenger |
Posted on 08/20/06 @ 12:58 PM |
McCloudDash91
File Author |
Posted on 08/20/06 @ 01:03 PM
that keeps happening to me, no matter what i try.
The reason that it's fuzzy is because i put in a little water [for the river, of course] using the paint brush on Paint, and it keeps getting messed up whenever i try to use it in the game itself.
Believe it or not, those two bitmaps are the same bitmap...
I have currently been looking into the problem for a few days now, and have come up with no solution....well, except for never using water in my bitmaps, which would be ridiculous.
anyways, sorry about that.
I thought it was just my computer, and it would be fine for other people, but i guess not...grr...[Edited on 08/20/06 @ 01:03 PM]
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WillNotAllow
(id: GeorgeROR) |
Posted on 08/20/06 @ 10:18 PM
Playability = 0.8
Starts out in black area, needs correction. It is captivating in the sense one must scour the countryside to seek help and find object. Also takes too long due to the location of the BLP, Recommend move him closer to the action.
Creativity and Map Design = 1.4
Creativity in the water paths, though they would look better if used for irrigation purposes. walking on water does not really serve a purpose unless you were trying to indicate that the bad guy have 'cold feet'. Clifs facing us had some coverage, but clifs facing away where bare. Some tradworkshops radomly scattered around paths is boring, use them don't abuse them. A little more thought into why something "happens' to exist at that point in time. Also for the dangerous lion, I though there would be some carnage around him. Also I suggest changing enemy name to Mongols to aid in easier comprehension of instrucitons. There were some very nice scenes, scout around and see (you probably need to anyway). Good editor use, can see creator made good effort. I will ignore the instructional map error for now since it was included serparatley.
Balance = 0.85
There is parts where you fight, destroy, parts you seek. and some 'figure this out' at the end.
Story = 0.8
Story is pretty good, promising personal involment in the rise of a hero. Too much in instructions? put mor in History? Read aloud your messages to check for errors.
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| IICDO |
Posted on 08/21/06 @ 09:36 AM
[quote=GeorgeROR]Read aloud your messages to check for errors.[/quote]
No disrespect but I suggest heeding ones own advice.
[Edited on 08/21/06 @ 09:37 AM]
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WillNotAllow
(id: GeorgeROR) |
Posted on 08/21/06 @ 12:18 PM |
| Hanz V_K |
Posted on 08/21/06 @ 07:41 PM
I'm proud to hear that you're among the TD members. :) *thumbs up*
See ya at the TD Forum![Edited on 08/21/06 @ 07:46 PM]
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McCloudDash91
File Author |
Posted on 08/21/06 @ 07:49 PM
thanks, though
btw, to everyone out there, im kinda running short on ideas for my levels x_x
so if you really want to, i'll take any and all suggestions into consideration, suffice that they are about the storyline [see my preview level], and they're actual ideas, not just jokes.
thanks for the help, if you choose to do so ^_^ |
WillNotAllow
(id: GeorgeROR) |
Posted on 08/21/06 @ 07:56 PM |
McCloudDash91
File Author |
Posted on 08/21/06 @ 08:23 PM
I'd be happy to cite you in the campaign, but only if i use the levels/basic ideas.
Just send me the levels, and if i like the ideas, i'll tell you and i'll mention you
thanks George, hope to see those levels soon ^_^ |
WillNotAllow
(id: GeorgeROR) |
Posted on 08/21/06 @ 10:09 PM [Edited on 10/01/06 @ 02:10 PM]
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