This is a trailer to my upcomming campaign having to do with if the Germans did acomplish their dream to invade the United States. I have not come up with a title for the Campaign yet but the file name is "NEW YORK".
The trailer is about 1 minute and 40 seconds so just sit back and watch. There might be another Trailer while i am making the campaign but for now this is it.
I won't review this 'cause it's a "movie," not an actual scenario even though I did kill the Germans. However, I do have some comments, and some questions.
1) the city of New York is poorly done, you should add more in terms of everything. More people, more cars, more buildings, more roads. That doesn't look like New York.
2) What's with the radio? How did it get from the random American asking for his wife (and what's up with that?) to the radio? And it saying "There's your answer."?
3) You should make the player actually win, not just say something along the lines of "hey! its done! you can quit now!" Because you just abandoned me in the scn, I went and killed the Germans by destroying all four airports.
4) This should be in cinematic mode, I only didn't move the camera because I was humoring you.
A trailer is supposed to show off the best of the work being done, make the project look exciting, or at least worth the download. This trailer fails to do so. I was not impressed by the level of effort put in (or apparently put in), the project does not look worth the download time if it stays at this level of effort. Improvement necessary.
Alex40045 File Author
Posted on 05/07/04 @ 05:05 PM
the radio is in the mans house and if you want i'll redo new york
Talon Karrde
Posted on 05/07/04 @ 11:55 PM
see, but we don't understand that the radio is in the man's house from this, and why does it say "there's your answer" anyway? and the trailer, in general, needs redoing.
Alex40045 File Author
Posted on 05/08/04 @ 11:12 AM
ok i'll redo. And thanks
Field Marshal BM
Posted on 05/09/04 @ 11:10 PM
Yes, please redo it, it was not very good. and new york was waaaay to small....and howbout putting it cinamatic mode ;-) lol
LittleNick6
Posted on 06/01/04 @ 11:06 PM
when you download it after it is done do you have to unzip the file. and if so how do i get to play it on Empires
nathankang0
Posted on 08/19/05 @ 04:04 PM
I Have Good News And Bad New
Bad News
1.) New York City Is Very Bad... Check The Help I Give You For Hints
2.)When It Ends Dont Make The Radio Say Its Over You May Leave Now Try Makiing Victory Or Load Scenario Cause I Was Able To Destory The Bombing Planes Easily.
3.) Make The Tank Factory Not Prduct Anything
Good News
I Will Help You
1.) Use Graphic Scale To Make An Building Bigger So It Really Looks Like New York...
2.) Make An Statue Of Katherine So Big It Looks Like The Statue Of Liberty..
3.)Dissallow The HONEY IM HOME.
(THESE HINTS WERE BY TALON KARDE)
Posted on 05/03/04 @ 07:27 PM