You play the role as an iniaite in Luke Skywalker's new Jedi Temple. You can be any species and each Jedi must have his or her own strength and weakness. You can be any previsily created character or (preferly) create a new one.

this is what you need to create your character.

name:
age:
race:
home planet:
hair:
eyes:
gender:
lightsaber:
strength:
weakness:
bio:

Please dont rush threw the story!

The Story procedes like a book please finish all posts with "..." example

John fought the bear... (im sure you can be more creative)

than the next person would pick up like so

Jill bought the droid...

than on and on and on...

This story takes place a few years before the main Vung invasion.

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1. Dont be all powerful. If you want a powerful strength you must a also have a powerful weakness.

2. You may have up to four characters

3. You can't kill kill anybody. (unless there a stromtrooper, Vung, ect.

4. You can't dethrone Luke (duh)

5. you cant play as a character that has already been chosen. (example only the person who has chosen Luke can control him)

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Name: Jayzen Nkvon
Race: Human
Home Planet: Lok
Hair: Dark brown
[Eyes]: (you left it out, but I felt it necessary) Violet
Gender: Male
Lightsaber: Yellow
Strength: Force Sensitive, Master Duelist,
Weakness: Impatient; Doesn't work well in groups; not very physically strong
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name: Searing (Nickname do to his real name would force him to obey any command given. Real name is Canas)
race: Firrerreo
home planet: None (Firreare was destroyed, and remaining Firrerreo's may now move to Belderone)
hair: multicolored
gender: male
lightsaber: orange
strength: Has the unique ability to raise the temperature so far as to cause objects to burn up, this can lead him to an extreme exhaustion if used too much though.
weakness: If someone says his real name, he is forced to obey them. Also his strongest ability can leave him in very weak states if used too much.
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name: Erk
race: Shi'ido (usually appears in a human form)
home planet: Lao-mon
hair: whatever color he wants
gender: male
lightsaber: red
strength: Can change into the form of any species he wants.
weakness: If he pushes himself too far when trying to cahnge form he can do a lot of damage to himself or get him stuck in a form for weeks. Also is very gullible.
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name: Nino
race: Zeltron
home planet: Zeltros
hair: blue
gender: female
lightsaber: pink
strength: Has pheromone abilities that allow her to cause almost anyone to fall in love with her. Also has quickly learned how to heal others with the force.
weakness: Do to her empathy she feels everyone's pain, and finds it incredibly difficult to do any harm to them.
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name: Sean
race: human
home planet: Tatooine
hair: dark brown
gender: male
lightsaber: blue
strength: Intelligent and uses quick moves to cover weak defense and offense. Knows what he needs to modify and fix machinery. Also can build simple things.
weakness: Has a weak defense and offense. Is also very gullible and easily distracted or surprised. Also rarely pays attention to surroundings.
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NAME: Alex Xelop
AGE: unknown around 20
RACE: human
HOME PLANET: Corrilea:
HAIR:Black/Brown
EYES: Green
GENDER: Male
LIGHTSABER: single/green blade
STRENGTH: Can balance both Dark and Light force powers. belives that with proper training one can use both sides of the force (like attacking in anger) without turning to the dark-side. Also has hidden potential.
WEAKNESS: Almost deaf in force sence. Can't feel anything in the forcemore than a few meters away. (like incoming blaster bolts.
BIO: Born on the planet correlia, he was taken at an early age by Darth Vader to be trained as his apprentice. A large gap is missing in his history between the time when he crashed on Correlia and defected to the Emperor and when he joined with LUKE SKYWALKER and his friends to destroy a rouge Grand Admirals recreation of the DEATH STAR. In order to stop the machine and earn Skywalker's trust Alex Heroicly sacrificed himself to destroy the ship. As the ship imploded with Alex stil inside Alex was presumed dead. But Alex had been frozen in time only to return 10 years later to save Luke's life. Now Alex is a student at LUKE SKYWALKER'S Jedi Academy on Yavin IV...
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Name: Luke Skywalker
Age: 33
Race: Human
Homeworld: Tatooine
Hair: Blond
Eyes: Brown (I suppose)
Gender: Male
Lightsaber: Green
Strength: Incredibly strong ligtsaber techniques and exellent Force Power abilities
Weakness: What weaknesses does Luke Skywalker has?
Bio: Luke Skywalker strated his life as a monsture farmer on Tatooine, then, an old man named Ben came and changed his life, after that, he killed the Emperor and Darth Vader and participated in the destruction of the Empire.
Now, he have opened an Jedi Academy on Yavin Four and is training the next generhation of Jedis.
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Name: Kyle Katarn
Age: 26
Race: Human
Homeworld: Sulon (Moon of Sullest)
Hair: Brown
Eyes: Brown
Gender: Male
Lightsaber: Blue
Strength: Strong Lightsaber style and good handeling of Force Powers
Weakness: Weak agianst drain attacks and the like
Bio: Kyle was born on Sulon, moon of Sullest, he graduated at the Imperial Academy and served abaord a Dreadnaught for some years, but when his farther was killed by the Dark Jedi Jerec, he defected to the Rebellion. Years later, he defeated Jerec at the Valley of the Jedi and some years later he stopped the would-be Emperor Desann from killing all the Jedi. He's now a teacher at the Academy.
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Name: Avian Solar
Gender: Female
Specie's: Human
Age: 26
Hair: Red
Eye's: Green
Saber Color: Blue
Proffesion: Rogue force sensitive
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Name: Uniah Kelya
Age: 16
Race: Twi'Lek
Homeplanet: Ryloth
Hair: inaplicable, but skin is violet
Eyes: Green
Gender: Female
Lightsaber: Silver
Strength: Strong in combat, good at moving things with the Force
Weaknesses: Has a terrible temper
Bio: Unlike most Twi'Lek women who go scantily clad, Uniah wears normal Jedi clothing. Her history is vague and mysterious.
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Name: Kenethor
Age: 22
Race: ???
Homeplanet: Yavin IV
Hair: Silver
Eyes: Blue
Gender: Male
Lightsaber: Silver
Strength: Is a renegade Jedi and therefore is highly trained in the dark side powers.
Weaknesses: socially inept and an outcast.
Bio: A dark Jedi who left the Jedi academy when he was 13. He was required to find a master but noone would accept him because of his temper and hatred toward the other padawans. He stole a lightsaber from the academy before he left and his been training ever since to defeat the jedi...
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Name: Kyp Durron
Age: 23
Race: Human
Home Planet: Kessel (I think)
Hair: Brown
Eyes: Blue
Gender: Male
Lightsaber: Red
Strenght: Incredibly force sensitve, can use his force powers unlike anyone else, also incredibly intelegent.
Weakness: Poor duelest, lacking in lightsaber skills, his past with the Dark Side sometimes hauntes him causing a breakdown and temporarily cripling him.
Bio: When Kyp was young his family was masacured in an Imperial raid. His brother and him was taken away to a stormtrooper training camp where he later escaped. After Kyps escape he was captured by a pirates and sold as a slave to the Huts on Kessel where he lived out the rest of his life until he encountered a certian Han Solo and Chewbaca. Kyp helped them escape on a cargo ship where he then used his skills with the force to safly pilot his way through the Maw cluster. Inside they encounterd a secret Imperial base developing a new secret wepon, the sun crusher. Upon learning of the Sun Crushers power to destroy an entire star Han and Kyp Hyjacked it and took it to the New Republic. When all was said and done Han took Kyp to Luke to develop his force powers. In the accadamy Kyp felt he was being held back by lukes training and decided to train himself in the Jungle. In the Jungle he encountered the spirit of an ancient Sith master, Exar Kun, who taught him of the power of the sith, and seduced him to the darkside. Kun greatly increased Kyps power and convinced him that training in the accadamy was no longer nesacary. Kyp then stole a B-Wing and left the planet on a long life-changing journy. His first destination was the Forest moon of Endor, where he visited the grave of Darth Vader where he spent some time meditating on the ways of the Dark Side. Kyp decided to take revenge on the people who harmed him and his family the most, the Empire. Searching the Galaxy with his mind he located the one thing that could help him do this, the Sun Crusher. After pinpointing its location he found it was in the middel of a star. Using his now greatly developed force powers he draged the Crusher out of the star. Kyp went back to the planet that was training his brother to be a stormtrooper. Ariving at the planet, he contacted the Administrator of the traning facilities where he encuried about hsi brother. Bored with the conversation the administrator told him Kyp that his brother died in a battel years ago. Furious, Kyp let out all his anger launched a missel into the center of the star of the systme. Frantic the administrator launched all TIE's he had at the Sun Crusher. A bit more inerested in the matter new the Administrator franticly searched For Kyps brother. He found him stationed on the planet itself as a security gaurd. By the time he haild Kyp and delivered the news it was too late, the distruction of the star was inevitable. He left the system as the star exploded behind him. Leading a life of revenge, he decided to go after the Imperials in the Maw. Using the sun crusher again to dertroy the facilites he realized that he was now fully on the path of the Darkside and wanted revenge on Kun for seting him down this path. Using his now incredibly powerfulll force abilites he distroyed the ancient sith spirit and the temple he resided in. Felling the pain of Kyps anger Luke defeated him in a battel and managed to bring him back to the light side. Where Kyp is now a vetrine at the temple and helps to train the new recruts in the ways of the force.
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Name: Mara Jade Skywalker
race: human
home planet: unknown
hair: red
eyes: green
lightsaber: single purple
strength: Advanced lightsaber technique and telepathy
weakness: if you can think of one let me know.
bio: simulair to Alex Xelop's background Mara was trained by the Emperor. The Emperor needed somebody who couldnt do his biding in secret. So he found Mara Jade. She never failed a mission. Save one. The Emperor knew of Vader's attemt to over throw him with Luke's help, so he got Mara to pretend to be a dancer at Jabba's Palace. She never got the chance to kill Skywalker. On her way back to corosaunt she felt the Emperor's death. Tortured by his spirit, Mara could hear the Emperors last cammond. YOU MUST KILL LUKE SKYWALKER! She joined with Talon Karde's smuggeling operation she came across Luke Skywalker stranded in his X-Wing. She reluctedly helped Luke in the Thrawn crisis where she put the emperor's spirit to rest by killing Luke's evil clone created by his hand he lost on bespin. She worked with Luke several more times until he perposed to her. Now Luke and Mara are happaly married and she is currently a Jedi Master on Yavin IV where she is currently considering taking Alex Xelp as her formal aprrentice...
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Name: Marka Sudo
Age: 28
Race: Klatooinian
Homeplanet: Coruscant
Hair: none
Eyes: Green
Gender: Male
Lightsaber: Red
Strength: His defence is his strength
Weakness: He is easially tempted
Bio: Marka was named after Marka Ragnos. His family was sith follower.
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name:Ulic Cay Skywalker
age:21
race:Human
home planet:Korriban
hair:brown
eyes:blue
gender:Male
lightsaber:Green and Blue
strength:has a strong style of doule lightsaber attacks and has a strong touch with the force.
weakness:being attacked be force drain and dark rage.
bio:He is the long lost son of of Anikin Skywalker.After his brith he was shipped to korriban because Padme(mother of Ulic)was affaid that Anikin may kill him.Know reunited with his brother and sister but they don't know it.Will they ever find out?
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name: Ector
age: 17
race: Twi'lek
home planet: Trloth
hair: none, white lekkus
eyes: green
gender: Male
lightsaber: yellow
strength: physically strong, highly skilled with a lightsaber
weakness: although he is not stupid, he isn't smart either and although he is excellent with a lightsaber, his ability to use the force is low
bio: Ector and his cousin Khleena are descent from Jedi who were killed in the Jedi massacre. They lived as urchants on the streets of Naar Shaada where they learned how to survive in harsh conditions and use a lightsaber.
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name: Khleena
age: 18
race: Twi'lek
home planet: Ryloth
hair: none, green lekkus
eyes: blue
gender: Female
lightsaber: yellow
strength: very fast and skilled with a lightsaber like her cousin. For some reason, her intuition is usually correct. Also very beutifull.
weakness: as a beutifull Twi'Lek female, she usually catches the attention of slavers, and is not all that strong.
bio: Ector's cousin. Grew up with him on the streets of Naar Shadda after most of her family was killed in the Jedi massacre.
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name: Phaladine
age: 18
race: Human
home planet: Naar Shaadda
hair: brown
eyes: hazel
gender: Male
lightsaber: red
strength: Incredilu smart and mischevious. Highly skilled with the force.
weakness: although very smart, he is scrawny and not strong at all. He is awfull with a lightsaber and can be beaten by almost any opponet in hand-to hand combat... if they get past his destructive force powers.
bio: Grew up as a child on the streets of Naar Shaada. After meating Ector and Khleena, he devised a plan to steel a civilian shuttle and use it to take refugee in the forests of Yavin 4 with the two of them. He has refused to reveal any information about his family except that they are dead, and was already skilled with the force when he met Ector and Khleena.

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-Chapter-One------------INVASION----------------------------

Life at the Jedi Academy goes on as normal. That is until An Inperial Assault Team armed with AT-STs and lead by a Dark Jedi attacks the Jedi Academy. Jayxen was captured by the dark Jedi and Avion set out to rescue him. During the heat of the battle Jayzen and Avion joined minds and killed the sith leader. Now Republic Troops have arrived and are chasing the Imperials off the planet. But, in the heat of the battle only Alex Xelop notices the stray dark Jedi scalling the Academy. Alex fired a clip at him and sacleed the Academy wall. Alex dueled him and discoverd it was his former friend Galoy. Alex defeated Galoy and put him in the Academy brige. Meanwhile Avion contracted a Dark side virus, which was apprantly stopped by Kyp. Alex than told Mara Skywalker had found out about Galoy. Mara in retur told Alex about the virus. starteled by this unexpected news Alex told Mara About a planet that had a simulair virus and everbody on it was killed. Alex left for the planet. Meanwhile disaster struck when Avion grew upset at Jayzen and ran off into the jungle, where she was kidnapped by a strange race of aliens who have the insane idea of sacrificing her to the volcano, (sounds like fun, huh)...

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After realiving Avion's good intentions, the aliens rose up against thier Dark Jedi Leader. Jayzen and Avion once again joined forces to defeat the dark jedi threat. After the Jedi's defeat, the temple which the battle took place in crumbled to the ground. Avion and Jayzen escaped the Temple unscathed, and returned to the Academy. Meanhile Searing and friends ran into a large pack of Dark Jedi controlles Hesiss and ran for thier lives, where they ran into three strange jedi. After talking Searing's orogins with each other they came to the conclusion that they were dark Jedi. One of the Jedi attacked Searing. Meanwhile The hord of Dark Jedi approched the Jedi Academy where Kyp watched from a distance. Giving up control of his body to his former master whithin him he destroyed the army with ease. Now is heading towards the Academy with his evil plans still at large...

[This message has been edited by Xelop (edited 02-09-2004 @ 09:15 PM).]