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posted 03-01-06 06:07 PM EDT (US)   
The Battle of Polis Massa

Story:
Star Wars: Twisted Universe: The Battle for Polis Massa


In the Twisted universe things are different by a large degree. It all started on the invisible hand when General Grievous made a daring attempt to kidnap Chancellor Palpatine. Anakin, Obi-Wan, and Palpatine were captured in attempt to escape from the ship after the defeat of Count Dooku. When on the bridge of the Invisible Hand the two jedi saw it as the perfect time to strike. With a swing of his saber, Anakin was able to kill General Greivous. With both its leaders gone the CIS broke and slowly disappeared.

With Greivous dead Obi-Wan no longer had to go to Utapau, And was capable of staying on coruscant where he helped Anakin when he needed it most. With this new support from his master, Anakin no longer needed to see Palpatine and no longer had any doubts with which he could be manipulated. His personallity changed and he was a happier peson. In fact Mace Windu began to trust Anakin and asked to come help remove Palptine from office. He went and together they fought Palpatine until he had reached the obsevation window. He saw that he could no longer hide his secret and jumped out the window. He survived by using the force to grab onto a passing speeder and get away.

For two years he hid, finally coming out in an attempt to estabalish an empire. He successfully swayed the confederacy leaders and many politicians from the republic. Soon the Empire and The Republic were equal in strength. For ten years Palpatine built an army grand enough to capture the republic. When it was finally done he realeased it's awsome might, And for the second time started a war for his own personal gain.

So began the Second Clone Wars.....


This is a brand new campaign being made by some scenario design up-and-comers, Darthjacob1153, Delta 618, and me, BriJr.

Features:
~Three different Civilizations with very different methods of play!
~Command the Empire's strength, the Rebels Stealth, and the Republic's Intellegence.
~Maybe a few mods.
~Innovative storyline
~Fun to play!(I hope)

This campaign is being made in three separate parts by three separate people:
BriJr========Empire
DarthJacob1153=Rebels
Delta618=====Republic

The Different Civs will have their own strongpoints as explained in the features:
The Empire will focus mainly on superior numbers and strength.
The Rebels will rely on stealth and surprising the enemy.
The Republic will focus on using brains and wit to defeat the Empire.

Screenshots

Empire:
Landing Zone:

Apparently the Rebels had time to prepare:

Some Eyecandy that won't be seen without cheats:

A Crater being excavated by Scientists and Rebels:

Yeah, they had time to prepare:

Another crater (very good, in my opinion):

The Empire capturing some scientists:


Mods
~Death Star Walls by Brownboot
~Imperial Control Panels by Brownboot
~Delta Squad by Delta 618
~maybe others



BriJr

[This message has been edited by BriJr (edited 04-03-2006 @ 03:22 PM).]

Replies:
posted 03-19-06 05:46 PM EDT (US)     121 / 165  
Good to hear from you dude, So much has happened over the weekend it's hard to think of what to say.

Oh forget it...
posted 03-20-06 05:46 PM EDT (US)     122 / 165  
Ya know, I was looking at the Wikipedia referance to Delta squad, and I think that's an excellent idea... as long as you can get Scorch's distinctive sense of humor. He sounds like the morale booster of the team. And make a referance to the eyebrow thing...

Also, this Wikipedia page and the ones attached can also help the Delta Squad mod with the pics... I noticed that the Commandos had bluish visors.


OOOO -DarthJacob1153- OOOO
Jorrel Fraajic (My Wookieepedia Profile)
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posted 03-20-06 05:52 PM EDT (US)     123 / 165  
It's cool how 3 newbies (I think) to scenario design joined together to make a scenario. Also, screenies would be helpful.

Anyway, good luck.


Sierra Wolf
posted 03-20-06 06:01 PM EDT (US)     124 / 165  
Yes, I'm a newbie (not a n00b, I'm just new...)

Quote:

User Profile for darthjacob1153
Member Since: 01-09-2006

Delta 618's a newbie (once again, not a n00b)

Quote:

User Profile for Delta 618
Member Since: 02-08-2006

And BriJr's been here a while longer, but is still a newbie compared to you. As for his newbie status, he is also not a n00b

Quote:

User Profile for BriJr
Member Since: 12-10-2005


And, I'll post screenies as soon as I get a new game disk... if you didn't see, my computer ate my old one.


OOOO -DarthJacob1153- OOOO
Jorrel Fraajic (My Wookieepedia Profile)
(ŻŻŻŻŻŻ{{============= Custom Saber Shop =============}}ŻŻŻŻŻŻ)

[This message has been edited by darthjacob1153 (edited 03-20-2006 @ 07:20 PM).]

posted 03-20-06 06:22 PM EDT (US)     125 / 165  
I'll post screenies as soon as I start, I couldn't keep my head in one place to save my life. I'm making a mod, this scenario, another scenario, my Air cruiser upgrade. I hate being like this.

Oh forget it...
posted 03-20-06 06:33 PM EDT (US)     126 / 165  
These are from Page 3 and I've changed it somewhat (more terrain mixing and such) but the basic stuff is still all there.
Pics:

Landed troops over destroyed Outpost:

Outpost holding scientists:

Another outpost:

The third outpost(Nice shot of Brownie's walls):

Random crater:

Mountain:


Just a note, I've been here since DFD was around (like late 2001 or 2002) but I never felt like registering


BriJr

[This message has been edited by BriJr (edited 03-20-2006 @ 06:35 PM).]

posted 03-20-06 06:41 PM EDT (US)     127 / 165  
I registered 2 months after finding the site. I didn't realize the forums were here LoL.

Oh forget it...

[This message has been edited by Delta 618 (edited 03-22-2006 @ 02:13 PM).]

posted 03-21-06 05:21 PM EDT (US)     128 / 165  
Ar e we back on track with the campaign? Can I take off the ON HOLD border?

BriJr
posted 03-21-06 05:36 PM EDT (US)     129 / 165  
I think you can... I'll be working on mine soon.

OOOO -DarthJacob1153- OOOO
Jorrel Fraajic (My Wookieepedia Profile)
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posted 03-21-06 06:28 PM EDT (US)     130 / 165  

Quote:

I registered 2 months finding the site. I didn't realize the forums were here LoL.

Hehe, that's my story, too. (only my brother found it when the game first came out, and I never bothered looking for forums or registering).

Anyway, the screenies aren't bad. The first could use a bit more terrain mixing and eye candy. Though I'm no pro myself, I know quite a good tricks. Anyway, maybe mix some sand 1, sand w/dirt and red desert into all of the asteroid. Also maybe use rocks 1 and maybe a bit of snow w/rock, and also some of the Carbon rock stuff (don't know what it's called. the stuff in the last pic). Also, the outposts look good, but maybe have a bit more eye candy, and it'll be great.


Sierra Wolf
posted 03-21-06 06:43 PM EDT (US)     131 / 165  
I've changed it a lot since then, those were just from about 1 hour of work

Quote:

from Page 3

Your opinions are much appreciated though!

I'll post new ones in 10 minutes.


BriJr

[This message has been edited by BriJr (edited 03-21-2006 @ 06:45 PM).]

posted 03-21-06 06:57 PM EDT (US)     132 / 165  
Ok, cool.

Sierra Wolf
posted 03-21-06 07:31 PM EDT (US)     133 / 165  
So I guess you figured out how to fix the chaos between you all. So the project will continue?

SilverSaber_Yoda
Currently Working On
STAR WARS SITH
RESIDENT EVIL: OPERATION PHOENIX
posted 03-21-06 07:33 PM EDT (US)     134 / 165  
Yes, very much so... as soon as I get my disk, which should be this week.

But that doesn't mean I'm not doing work on my scenario... just none of it ingame. Right now it's all concept stuff.


OOOO -DarthJacob1153- OOOO
Jorrel Fraajic (My Wookieepedia Profile)
(ŻŻŻŻŻŻ{{============= Custom Saber Shop =============}}ŻŻŻŻŻŻ)
posted 03-21-06 07:49 PM EDT (US)     135 / 165  
Sorry, it ended up being longer than 10 min, I had a phone call.

Landing Zone:

Apparently the Rebels had time to prepare:

Some Eyecandy that won't be seen without cheats:

A Crater being excavated by Scientists and Rebels:

Yeah, they had time to prepare:

Another crater (very good, in my opinion):

The Empire capturing some scientists:

There's some more.


BriJr
posted 03-21-06 08:08 PM EDT (US)     136 / 165  
Ahh, that's a lot better. Still, it could use sand 1 and sand w/rock, as I said earlier, and also maybe add some more volcanic rock, and some of the Red Carbon Rocks (or whatever those carbon rocks are ). Definately add some of those. I'd also suggest adding a bit more of the sandish rocks. Another thing I'd suggest is taking off that crater at the bottom of the crater. I can't tell if it's already like this, but take not that craters don't just go down, they go up, then there's a hole. Still very nice, though. btw, BriJr, do you have MSN or yahoo messanger?

Sierra Wolf
posted 03-21-06 08:27 PM EDT (US)     137 / 165  
I have AIM and MSN but I can't get in for some reason: bdijr@comcast.net AIM= BriJr Dude

Try to IM me, see if it works.


BriJr

[This message has been edited by BriJr (edited 03-21-2006 @ 08:30 PM).]

posted 03-22-06 10:22 PM EDT (US)     138 / 165  
I don't have AIM...just MSN and Yahoo.

Sierra Wolf
posted 03-23-06 06:09 AM EDT (US)     139 / 165  
MSN= bdijr@comcast.net

BriJr
posted 03-23-06 11:30 AM EDT (US)     140 / 165  

Its nothing special, but luks gd palleted


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Power Wisdom Courage
posted 03-23-06 11:44 AM EDT (US)     141 / 165  
I like it!

Oh forget it...
posted 03-23-06 08:27 PM EDT (US)     142 / 165  
Thanks Bluetuft!

BriJr
posted 03-23-06 10:22 PM EDT (US)     143 / 165  
Nothing's wrong with bluetuft's but I was working on a BMP for this already so:

Hope you like it.

No will to wake for this morn.
To see another black rose born,Deathbed is slowly covered with snow.
Angels, they fell first but I'm still here.
Alone as they are drawing near, In heaven my masterpiece will finally be sung

End of All, Nighwish
posted 03-24-06 10:50 AM EDT (US)     144 / 165  
The Stormies in the background aren't in the campaign It looks great though!

In this campaign, the Emperor uses droids because he sways the Trade Federation, Techno Union, etc. to his side and does not control the Republic.


BriJr

[This message has been edited by BriJr (edited 03-24-2006 @ 10:51 AM).]

posted 03-24-06 11:28 AM EDT (US)     145 / 165  
I personally prefer the bottom bitmap, suits more, if he adds a few droids or something im sure it will be alright, besudes, its the public you wanna impress, eh?

JackXbox
posted 03-24-06 11:47 AM EDT (US)     146 / 165  
Did the storyline change at some point?

If so I liked this one better. If not then, it is an awesome storyline. Just a question, why are there rebels?

And if Anakin is still a jedi, what about Padme and the twins, and the Jedi code, and Obi Wan, and what keeps Palpatine from just patching in the codes to excute order 66? Although it is a great storyline, there are major holes. Please work in the answers into the storyline or a reply or just into the finished game.

Thanks, SSY


SilverSaber_Yoda
Currently Working On
STAR WARS SITH
RESIDENT EVIL: OPERATION PHOENIX
posted 03-24-06 12:06 PM EDT (US)     147 / 165  
Yes the story did change. The reason there are rebles is the fact that they exist in Imperial space some one has to fight the oppression. Anakin quite the jedi and became Chancalore, and the twins went to the temple for training. Obi wan is still a jedi, took some greif for hiding Anakins secret. But he's still in ther order. And when Palpatine "died" the clones went through retraining and such becouse the Jedi relized that he had his finger in a lot of stuff. I never put that in becouse it was something that would have been eased into the story in our last campaign which would have required more mods and precision than this.

Oh forget it...
posted 03-24-06 12:15 PM EDT (US)     148 / 165  
updated the bmp a bit.


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Power Wisdom Courage
posted 03-24-06 12:50 PM EDT (US)     149 / 165  
My eyes! They burn.
posted 03-24-06 02:11 PM EDT (US)     150 / 165  
Well, at least now its is clearer. Thanx

Snags 150.


SilverSaber_Yoda
Currently Working On
STAR WARS SITH
RESIDENT EVIL: OPERATION PHOENIX

[This message has been edited by SilverSaber_Yoda (edited 03-24-2006 @ 02:14 PM).]

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