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Topic Subject: Presenting - War of the White Rose, Tale of Richard the III
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posted 01-16-06 09:37 AM CT (US)   
Lance O Lot and Imperial Creations Presents -

Created and Written by
Lance O Lot

One child
Born in the mist

One child
Grew up in strength

One child
Who lost what he loved

One child
Who triumphed

One child
Brother of a king

One child
Who became king

This is his story
The story of the

King of England
Richard the III


Background:

This is a Campaign based on the true events of Richard III. It starts when he was just a boy and ends in his horrible, but noble death at Bosworth Field in Leicestershire. The narrator, a mysterious man deep in the forest, shares his tales with a young man who has gotten lost in his woods.


Progress:

Overall 12% done,

Prologue – The Forgotten Past | 100% (in Blacksmith)

Chapter 1 - The Queen's Army | 5%

Screen Shots:

Prolobue - A Hawk's Past:
|Scout 1|Scout 2|Francis |Camp 1|Camp 2|Guys Make|Torch|Charge|Battle|Chase|Horse Trip|Drifting|Lying On Shore|
Get Wood|Fire|Farming|Young Man|End Credits|


Teaser: |Movie| Give all Creadit to Sandra Worth, I found this on her site at http://sandraworth.com/index.html

The Teaser is Here! Download it and see what this campaign is all about!

Playtesting:

I think I will need about 10 – 15 good playtesters. I will not turn down anyone, first come first serve (noobies allowed I guess), but if you don’t replay with in a week without a good excuse, or if I think you’re doing a bad job, I will remove you from the list and there will be a new spot for someone else to join.

| = haven't sent file yet || = sent first version. Once all are || I will send next version and the code will reset it's self. I'm just gonna forget that thing and I'll just send to all at once...

Playtesters So Far:

| kfish2oo2 | (I think I have e-mail somewhere))
| MoX_MiThRaNdIr | (heyfreakhead@hotmail.com)
| Dead_Jedi20 | (Deadjedi20@yahoo.com)
| fuzzydude45 | (Keyblade916@aol.com)
| Tommy Harms | (tommyharms@hotmail.com)
|brandonridgway35| (brandon_ridgway35@hotmail.com)
|Map_maker_tester| (fredrik@hiaasen.no)
| sceletar | (sceletarrocks@gmail.com)
|INdesstructable | (INdesstructable@aol.com)
| WildCardDoW | (wildCarddoW@hotmail.com)
| Stu183 | (raiden183@hotmail.com)
| MeGaIdIoT | (atjoslin@earthlink.net)


Be Quick and Sign Up!

Well that’s that! I hope this campaign changes your mind about King Richard III and I hope you enjoy it! (When it’s done)

Thanks!

-Lance O Lot


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[This message has been edited by Lance O Lot (edited 04-18-2006 @ 04:05 PM).]

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posted 01-16-06 09:52 AM CT (US)     1 / 173  
Ill Also playtest for you.


Zone Name 1: _Rot_7324783148

Zone Name 2: _RoT_MapEditor


Edit*: So sry for messin up and not spelling correctly or adding zone names or anything. My head was in the clouds this morning.

Edit again* sry Lance I meant i could give 2 playtesters(me and my brother) but my other computer crashed today so im only 1 playtester now.

Edit* My Email is Keyblade916@aol.com, ive just been actin stupid lately.

[This message has been edited by fuzzydude45 (edited 01-17-2006 @ 12:29 PM).]

posted 01-16-06 10:02 AM CT (US)     2 / 173  
You skip playtesting just to make your own scenario?

I doubt you'd get playtesters unless its Rpg heheheheh...


Edit* Fuzzy spell right!!It's annyoing!!!

Edit again* Oh never mind fuzzy...


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[This message has been edited by DeadJedi20 (edited 01-16-2006 @ 10:04 AM).]

posted 01-16-06 11:34 AM CT (US)     3 / 173  
fuzzy, what are you saying? You have two computers? So what, it doesn't mean you're going to playtest twice? Explain...

Any playtesters??


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posted 01-16-06 04:11 PM CT (US)     4 / 173  
I'll playtest. heyfreakhead@hotmail.com

MoX_MiThRaNdIr
Current Project: A Battle for Peace - 45% Complete-(Reopened)

"You won't feel better until you get this thing off your chest"- Patrick Star (Spongebob Squarepants)
92% of teens have moved on to rap. If you are part of the 8% who still listen to real music, copy and paste this into your sig.
posted 01-16-06 04:19 PM CT (US)     5 / 173  
Okay! Adding you to list...

Also added screen shots


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posted 01-16-06 05:03 PM CT (US)     6 / 173  
I probably cant playtest, but good luck. I look forward to seeing something about the War of the roses.
posted 01-16-06 06:51 PM CT (US)     7 / 173  
Ok ill playtest in my spare time...Deadjedi20@yahoo.com

I got 4.0 in my campaign anyways after all the hardwork, so its time to take a break.

Okay im open for playtesting!!!!! Please put me in!!


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[This message has been edited by DeadJedi20 (edited 01-17-2006 @ 05:26 PM).]

posted 01-16-06 07:06 PM CT (US)     8 / 173  
I'll playtest, Therunnerking90@yahoo.com. I'm not sure i'll have to much spare time tho. Is that ok?
posted 01-17-06 00:50 AM CT (US)     9 / 173  
Ooo, I like that torch. Good Job. Mind if I use that lol?



dannyking.me


[This message has been edited by newIdea (edited 01-17-2006 @ 00:54 AM).]

posted 01-17-06 00:56 AM CT (US)     10 / 173  
The torch looks very creative, awesome idea! I'm not so sure about people using the AoE shallow tiles. They may be something creative to use, since they are hardly ever seen, but they look so messed up...
posted 01-17-06 01:36 AM CT (US)     11 / 173  
Lance alot, use this email instead, +++++++++++++++++.

[This message has been edited by Mashek331 (edited 12-06-2006 @ 07:22 AM).]

posted 01-17-06 11:36 AM CT (US)     12 / 173  
Well actually I got the torch idea from somewhere..just can't remember where. Just don't want who ever thought up the idea to get angry..

And thanks to all for signing up for playtesting, I apreatiate it!

@ the slayer, doesn't matter if you don't have much time, as long as you contribuit something, or i'll have to remove you from list...

-Thanks again

EDIT: Hey fuzzy, what's your e-mail?

EDIT2: yea rwilde i might take them out, I was just kinda fooling aroun with them to see who they looked.


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[This message has been edited by Lance O Lot (edited 01-17-2006 @ 11:46 AM).]

posted 01-17-06 12:26 PM CT (US)     13 / 173  
Sorry bout that lance my email is Keyblade916@aol.com
I've been kinda stupid this weekend i havent been in school for a while so...
posted 01-17-06 03:40 PM CT (US)     14 / 173  

Quote:

I'm not so sure about people using the AoE shallow tiles. They may be something creative to use, since they are hardly ever seen, but they look so messed up...

Acually, they look pretty sweet, and marshy, if you change gaia's color to Green, Cyan, or even Orange! Trouble is that the color always reverts back after a playtest.

Looks good Lance, but my e-mail has been messed up for a while, so I can't test it for you just yet.

posted 01-17-06 05:49 PM CT (US)     15 / 173  
Thanks for the info Mr. Pi I never thought that the shallow tiles changed colour! Also Pi do you want me to put your name down on the list, so you can wait intill your e-mail is up and running again?

@ Fuzzy adding your e-mail!

EDIT: Mashek did I send you the first version yet? Can't remember I think I might have sent it to your other e-mail.


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[This message has been edited by Lance O Lot (edited 01-17-2006 @ 05:51 PM).]

posted 01-18-06 03:56 PM CT (US)     16 / 173  
OK after playtesing the Scenrio i found that there is two problems.

1. In the trigger "Talk to scout" You have "I" put twice when the first 1 isnt needed. Just check it and you'll see it.

2. During the battle, The guys go past each other and then attack, Make it so they go to the same place with the patrol instead of past each other.

posted 01-18-06 04:17 PM CT (US)     17 / 173  
Thanks! Big help!

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posted 01-18-06 05:13 PM CT (US)     18 / 173  
No you haven't. Sorry about all the emails. I cant use that one start with Pen0022.
posted 01-18-06 05:21 PM CT (US)     19 / 173  
Alright, I sent again, you sould get it soon...

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posted 01-18-06 06:05 PM CT (US)     20 / 173  
I think you should send new version because the only person who hasnt gotten it is the person u dont kno if still wants to playtest!
posted 01-19-06 04:40 PM CT (US)     21 / 173  
I'm working on it Should be done next part really soon...

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posted 01-19-06 05:56 PM CT (US)     22 / 173  
Hey Lance alot, I still have not recieved your email. I dont have spam filters on, so it cant be that.
posted 01-19-06 06:49 PM CT (US)     23 / 173  
Ok, I playtested this again just now to refresh my memory, so here's what I got:

The mad design/eyecamdy was very well done, it appealed to me greatly. The triggers were good, I couldn't detect one single bug in the whole thing. The only thing that I would suggest is that you have the view automaticaly follow the scout at the begining, and the general running to the water at the end. About the music, I actualy liked the screamy music better, but the soft stuff fit the mood better, so I would say go with the soft stuff. Overall, I thought that it was pretty good, I will definantly playtest the next part of this as well. Keep up the good work, I think that you are on your way to becoming a great designer


MoX_MiThRaNdIr
Current Project: A Battle for Peace - 45% Complete-(Reopened)

"You won't feel better until you get this thing off your chest"- Patrick Star (Spongebob Squarepants)
92% of teens have moved on to rap. If you are part of the 8% who still listen to real music, copy and paste this into your sig.
posted 01-19-06 09:01 PM CT (US)     24 / 173  
Hey Lance O Lot, I tested it and i thought it was very well done. The only thing is what MoX said. The scout probably should be followed. and maybe some more eye candy to the camp but that is about all. I probably won't be able to test the rest cuz I'll be hooked on AOEIII. good luck.
posted 01-20-06 11:28 AM CT (US)     25 / 173  
That's really funny guys, because before I read those two posts I had already changed the view thing Thanks though. I also really need one or two of my playtesters to look at the text/writing/dialogue please! Because I'm not a very good writer so if someone could maybe write a edited version that would amazing!

EDIT: oh yea and Mashek, sorry about that, just a little mix up, instead of sending you the first one. I think it would just be better if you waited for the next version.

[This message has been edited by Lance O Lot (edited 01-20-2006 @ 11:29 AM).]

posted 01-20-06 01:55 PM CT (US)     26 / 173  
I didn't look at the comentary very carefully, as that wasn't one of my focus points, but it seemed ok to me.

MoX_MiThRaNdIr
Current Project: A Battle for Peace - 45% Complete-(Reopened)

"You won't feel better until you get this thing off your chest"- Patrick Star (Spongebob Squarepants)
92% of teens have moved on to rap. If you are part of the 8% who still listen to real music, copy and paste this into your sig.
posted 01-20-06 02:44 PM CT (US)     27 / 173  
Yea that's okay, I was kinda hoping that kfish would do it but he hasn't been around lately, anyone else look at the comentary?

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posted 01-20-06 05:09 PM CT (US)     28 / 173  
Lance a Lot, I just got Version 1.1, plus two of the music files, thanks.
posted 01-20-06 05:24 PM CT (US)     29 / 173  
I playtested the next version and i Say that it look much better then b4 but when you do get to the part where u stoped u didnt make it declare victory(whether u did this on purpose or not idk) But also at the beggining u didnt make it change veiw to the musiv selector so it wasnt neccesarily a sit back and relax thing right there but the rest is looking promising. Keep Up the GREAT WORK.
posted 01-21-06 10:03 AM CT (US)     30 / 173  
Thanks! Things like that keep me motivated!

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posted 01-21-06 11:10 AM CT (US)     31 / 173  
Lance, i dont have any of the scenario files!

Yoda impression: Send them to me you will hmmm...


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posted 01-21-06 12:38 PM CT (US)     32 / 173  
Hey Lance, do you still need playtesters? If so, I could playtest...

Email: johnathanh@crosswind.net

posted 01-21-06 03:51 PM CT (US)     33 / 173  
Dead Jedi, hmmm I don't know why... Is the e-mail up^ there correct? Oh I have an Idea! Send me a e-mail to basketball_327@hotmail.com and I'll replay with the sceniro attached.

@ Super cell, your in!


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posted 01-21-06 04:05 PM CT (US)     34 / 173  
Sure no doubt you will find an email.

Hey make it a scenario version so i can edit it and fix some bugs and things like that. But really, its up to you.

Edit* Did you add space to my email like this when emailing me?

Dead jedi20@yahoo.com
Wrong!!!

Deadjedi20@yahoo.com
Right!! Email me without the space next time! If you didn't add the space, what email address did you send the scenario to?


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[This message has been edited by DeadJedi20 (edited 01-21-2006 @ 04:12 PM).]

posted 01-22-06 04:41 PM CT (US)     35 / 173  
Yay! Images are back! Wooohooo!

@ dead jedi, I think I sent it to dead_jedi20@blablabal
(I added a "_")

Next time i'll get it right.


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