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posted 01-01-16 08:46 AM CT (US)   

Congratulations to MawBTS, Winner of the AoKH Writing Competition 2016!



Previous Writing Competitions:

Popeychops: 2015
CarolKarine: 2013
Leif Ericson: 2012
sly_guy: 2010
Scud: 2008



Now that the mistletoe has made its way into the bin, the Christmas tree has gone back into the attic, and all the New Year's Champagne has been consumed, what is left to fill the empty hours?

Of course, we all have terribly busy lives of work, friendship, and study, yet sometimes we wish for a way to procrastinate from it, as I am now. And so, as the snow that clads our locales melts away, my thoughts wander to a faraway land, of wizards and elves, where I can tell a story of companionship, adventure, and peril.

I imagine many of you have stories of your own. This Competition is an opportunity to share them with the community.

Whether you prefer prose or poetry, realism or fantasy, modern or historical, dramatic or humorous, we accept them all. So, this is the perfect opportunity for all of you budding storytellers to flex your writing muscles and exercise your creative side!

Rules:

What's a competition without rules? Despite your groaning, feast your eyes over these rules below, because you don't want to write a 175 page novel and realise it won't be accepted.

Your entry must not exceed 10,000 words – if you get up to 10001, you can probably find a sentence to rephrase. No preference will be given for entries of any length: they will be judged for their consistent merit.

Your entry must be written in the English language.

Your entry must be a work of fiction; novellas, short stories, prose, poetry or screenplays. Any fictional entry will be accepted. However, articles, essays and so forth will not be accepted.

Your entry must be sent in before April 15th, which means any time during or before April 14th. Please send your entries to Popeychops@heavengames.com

Once you have sent your entry, you will have no chance to edit it further – it is considered final. Make sure you’re happy with it before you send it in.

Your entry must be entirely your own work – no team entries, no cooperation between two writers, etc. It is permitted to use real or existing characters or events, but your own work must be the full scope of your entry.

Your entry must be submitted in one of the following digital formats: [.doc, .docx, .txt, .pdf]
Alternatively, you may send it as the body of an email to Popeychops@heavengames.com.

The content of your entry must obey the CoC.

The Judges' interpretation of the rules is final.

Judging:

The competition has three judges who will award a maximum of 50 points to each story; up to 25 for Technical Proficiency, and up to 25 for Literary Content. The entries will be judged by myself, Major Helper and Lief Ericson. The winning entry will be the one with the highest combined score from all judges. In the event of a tie, the award will be shared between the winning entries. The judges will be receiving entries without the name of the author, so that they can judge them blind. Please don't say anything in the thread which will identify an entry. Obviously, as the organiser, I will be unable to judge the entries blindly.

"Technical Proficiency" is the assessment of your ability to write in the English language. The main areas that will be judged will be how well your entry is structured, the literary technique displayed, the use of language for effect, characterisation, thematic development and others. You will be marked down for spelling and grammatical errors (unless of course it is used as colloquialism during dialogue), so be sure to check your entries thoroughly for any errors.

"Literary Content" will be the content of the entry itself, and to be blunt - did the judges like it? Was your entry satisfying, was the plot developed, or was the dialogue wooden with the characters lifeless? It may be good writing a well thought out and technical piece of prose, but if it isn't interesting to the judges you are shooting yourself in the foot.

If you ask the judges nicely, they may write an extended critique of your work! Now that you know what to do and what to expect, it's time to let the creative juices flow! Good luck and have fun writing!

Entrants: (entrants in bold have submitted)

Vinyl
MawBTS
Moff

Dropped out:

Mash
Mithril Knight
RedHandedJill
CarolKarine
Gunkanchud
Canada Dry Ginger Ale
PresterJohn
Lord Basse


Downloads for the entries:
Moff's Death Before Dishonor

Member of BlackForest Studios
Co-creator of Silent Evil (4.6) Voted Best Multiplayer Scenario of 2009 (Most Fave'd Multiplayer Scenario)
and The Seas of Egressa (4.8) Voted Best Multiplayer Scenario of 2010
"Popey just hates everywhere." - Chocolate Jesus, on my fear of Romanian organ-traffickers
"Hooray for Dear Leader-Comrade-Generalissimo-Presidente-Lord Protector Popey!" - Lord Sipia, on my benevolent, iron-fisted rule
"You're not Popeychops; you don't get to physics." - Moff, in response to a clumsy muon simile

[This message has been edited by Major Helper (edited 04-26-2016 @ 11:17 PM).]

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posted 01-01-16 09:40 AM CT (US)     1 / 262  
The content of your entry must obey the CoC.
This contest is biased against slashfic!

Purveyor of the Poi | Deliverer of Desu | Weeaboo Brony Conserative - The Ultimate Foe to the Internet
Lord Sipia: "THIS IS WHAT HAPPENS WHEN SIPPY IS EXCLUDED! EVERYBODY LOSES THEIR SANITY" | Also Lord Sipia: "...Of course. Prepare the butter."
Hi, I'm Kongou! Are you my admiral?
posted 01-01-16 09:47 AM CT (US)     2 / 262  
Yes, it is.

Member of BlackForest Studios
Co-creator of Silent Evil (4.6) Voted Best Multiplayer Scenario of 2009 (Most Fave'd Multiplayer Scenario)
and The Seas of Egressa (4.8) Voted Best Multiplayer Scenario of 2010
"Popey just hates everywhere." - Chocolate Jesus, on my fear of Romanian organ-traffickers
"Hooray for Dear Leader-Comrade-Generalissimo-Presidente-Lord Protector Popey!" - Lord Sipia, on my benevolent, iron-fisted rule
"You're not Popeychops; you don't get to physics." - Moff, in response to a clumsy muon simile
posted 01-01-16 09:57 AM CT (US)     3 / 262  
B... but... big-mustache-on-little-mustache...

Purveyor of the Poi | Deliverer of Desu | Weeaboo Brony Conserative - The Ultimate Foe to the Internet
Lord Sipia: "THIS IS WHAT HAPPENS WHEN SIPPY IS EXCLUDED! EVERYBODY LOSES THEIR SANITY" | Also Lord Sipia: "...Of course. Prepare the butter."
Hi, I'm Kongou! Are you my admiral?
posted 01-01-16 10:14 AM CT (US)     4 / 262  
You can do that in your own time, Moff. >_>

"Have you ever had a dream that you thought was impossible to achieve? Well, some people say nothing is impossible. But I do nothing every day! So you can definitely do it."
--Tofu the dog's infinite wisdom

"British English is easy! Just use an 's' instead of a 'z' and replace 'or' with 'our' and you're dandy." "Do you want pissa our noodles for dinner?" "u better not piss in r noodles m8"
--Classic exchange between Popeychops and John the Late
posted 01-01-16 10:15 AM CT (US)     5 / 262  
But I want to share my gift with the world.

Purveyor of the Poi | Deliverer of Desu | Weeaboo Brony Conserative - The Ultimate Foe to the Internet
Lord Sipia: "THIS IS WHAT HAPPENS WHEN SIPPY IS EXCLUDED! EVERYBODY LOSES THEIR SANITY" | Also Lord Sipia: "...Of course. Prepare the butter."
Hi, I'm Kongou! Are you my admiral?
posted 01-01-16 10:17 AM CT (US)     6 / 262  
The world hopes it came with a receipt.

"Have you ever had a dream that you thought was impossible to achieve? Well, some people say nothing is impossible. But I do nothing every day! So you can definitely do it."
--Tofu the dog's infinite wisdom

"British English is easy! Just use an 's' instead of a 'z' and replace 'or' with 'our' and you're dandy." "Do you want pissa our noodles for dinner?" "u better not piss in r noodles m8"
--Classic exchange between Popeychops and John the Late
posted 01-01-16 10:18 AM CT (US)     7 / 262  
Sharing is caring. And indeed, there must be receipt before there can be return. <_<

Purveyor of the Poi | Deliverer of Desu | Weeaboo Brony Conserative - The Ultimate Foe to the Internet
Lord Sipia: "THIS IS WHAT HAPPENS WHEN SIPPY IS EXCLUDED! EVERYBODY LOSES THEIR SANITY" | Also Lord Sipia: "...Of course. Prepare the butter."
Hi, I'm Kongou! Are you my admiral?
posted 01-01-16 10:54 AM CT (US)     8 / 262  
I'll enter if I have an idea.

Proud owner of Splash Splash XLIV: Leave it there for someone to find, Which is on record for being the fastest thread to reach 2500 posts - which was completed in 28 hours and 17 minutes, from start to finish!
Yeah, the republican party is pretty much one big schizophrenic ball of contradictions nowadays. - Ax_man1
double post for milestone, then relentlessly bash on the community for the hell of it... stay classy thymole. - Lurker
posted 01-01-16 11:29 AM CT (US)     9 / 262  
I'm interested, we'll see if I actually get anything in.

"He is no fool who gives what he cannot keep to gain what he cannot lose."-Jim Elliot
posted 01-01-16 11:37 AM CT (US)     10 / 262  
>.> I wish I bundled my Creative Writing Poems together.

Life is bleak
My memes are bleak
Once upon a time
I ate a lime
posted 01-01-16 12:09 PM CT (US)     11 / 262  
If 1 is a subtle reference to mostly covered bosoms and 10 is tactile-sensory integrated vr porn experience, how graphic can we get? This is important.
posted 01-01-16 12:23 PM CT (US)     12 / 262  
If 1 is a subtle reference to mostly covered bosoms and 10 is tactile-sensory integrated vr porn experience, how graphic can we get? This is important.
Please read the Forum CoC.

Member of BlackForest Studios
Co-creator of Silent Evil (4.6) Voted Best Multiplayer Scenario of 2009 (Most Fave'd Multiplayer Scenario)
and The Seas of Egressa (4.8) Voted Best Multiplayer Scenario of 2010
"Popey just hates everywhere." - Chocolate Jesus, on my fear of Romanian organ-traffickers
"Hooray for Dear Leader-Comrade-Generalissimo-Presidente-Lord Protector Popey!" - Lord Sipia, on my benevolent, iron-fisted rule
"You're not Popeychops; you don't get to physics." - Moff, in response to a clumsy muon simile
posted 01-01-16 12:47 PM CT (US)     13 / 262  
You want us to look at your CoC? <_<

Purveyor of the Poi | Deliverer of Desu | Weeaboo Brony Conserative - The Ultimate Foe to the Internet
Lord Sipia: "THIS IS WHAT HAPPENS WHEN SIPPY IS EXCLUDED! EVERYBODY LOSES THEIR SANITY" | Also Lord Sipia: "...Of course. Prepare the butter."
Hi, I'm Kongou! Are you my admiral?
posted 01-01-16 12:56 PM CT (US)     14 / 262  
Eurgh. I've seen a lot of disgusting things in my short life, but I don't think I want to look at that.

Also, thought about entering, have a few ideas, but I'm not sure if I'm ready yet.

Have fun, all.
posted 01-01-16 01:42 PM CT (US)     15 / 262  
You want us to look at your CoC?
Oh, oh my

"He is no fool who gives what he cannot keep to gain what he cannot lose."-Jim Elliot
posted 01-01-16 01:45 PM CT (US)     16 / 262  
If 1 is a subtle reference to mostly covered bosoms and 10 is tactile-sensory integrated vr porn experience, how graphic can we get? This is important.
3.

Everyone just use your brains. The entries get posted on the website. They need to be about the same standard as blacksmith submissions, forum posts, or anything else that appears here.

"And Matt is a prolific lurker, watching over the forum from afar in silence, like Batman. He's the president TC needs, and possibly also the one it deserves." - trebuchet king
posted 01-01-16 01:47 PM CT (US)     17 / 262  
How do artful euphemisms push the rating?

Purveyor of the Poi | Deliverer of Desu | Weeaboo Brony Conserative - The Ultimate Foe to the Internet
Lord Sipia: "THIS IS WHAT HAPPENS WHEN SIPPY IS EXCLUDED! EVERYBODY LOSES THEIR SANITY" | Also Lord Sipia: "...Of course. Prepare the butter."
Hi, I'm Kongou! Are you my admiral?
posted 01-01-16 01:56 PM CT (US)     18 / 262  
How artful?

"And Matt is a prolific lurker, watching over the forum from afar in silence, like Batman. He's the president TC needs, and possibly also the one it deserves." - trebuchet king
posted 01-01-16 02:06 PM CT (US)     19 / 262  
What if you substitute size-accurate artillery terminology...?

Purveyor of the Poi | Deliverer of Desu | Weeaboo Brony Conserative - The Ultimate Foe to the Internet
Lord Sipia: "THIS IS WHAT HAPPENS WHEN SIPPY IS EXCLUDED! EVERYBODY LOSES THEIR SANITY" | Also Lord Sipia: "...Of course. Prepare the butter."
Hi, I'm Kongou! Are you my admiral?
posted 01-01-16 03:52 PM CT (US)     20 / 262  
Count me in.

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posted 01-02-16 01:13 AM CT (US)     21 / 262  
I wrote a SnowCrash inspired MLP deconstructionist piece inspecting the concept of predestination as a motivational, demotivational, and self-fulfilling force.

It requires knowledge that horses have pictures on their butts that say what they're good at.
posted 01-02-16 01:26 AM CT (US)     22 / 262  
Papeychops can let me know if I need to send him the clean version but I think I am good.
posted 01-02-16 04:24 AM CT (US)     23 / 262  
You probably should.

Member of BlackForest Studios
Co-creator of Silent Evil (4.6) Voted Best Multiplayer Scenario of 2009 (Most Fave'd Multiplayer Scenario)
and The Seas of Egressa (4.8) Voted Best Multiplayer Scenario of 2010
"Popey just hates everywhere." - Chocolate Jesus, on my fear of Romanian organ-traffickers
"Hooray for Dear Leader-Comrade-Generalissimo-Presidente-Lord Protector Popey!" - Lord Sipia, on my benevolent, iron-fisted rule
"You're not Popeychops; you don't get to physics." - Moff, in response to a clumsy muon simile
posted 01-02-16 05:06 AM CT (US)     24 / 262  
A Guide to Popey's judging criteria

Technical Ability

Note: spelling/grammatical errors will be taken into account, lowering the score of any entry that otherwise would score higher than 5 marks.

  • 0 Marks - The entry does not demonstrate any ability of writing in the English language.

  • 5 Marks - The entry employs the English language in a rudimentary fashion, with either spelling or grammatical errors frequent enough to make the entry difficult to understand.

  • 10 Marks - The entry is written in good English.

  • 15 Marks - The entry is written in a style that benefits its content.

  • 20 Marks - The entry is written using literary devices that benefit its content. The tone of the entry is consistent, or varied for effect. Characters, if used, express emotions and are recognisable as individuals in their own right.

  • 25 Marks - The author shows flair for writing with the English language. The spelling and grammar are impeccable, the use of the English language challenges my understanding of it. Characters, if used, are developed in a natural way which expresses their personality, sentience, human dignity and emotions. The quality of the writing is undifferentiated from a professional work.


    Literary Content

  • 0 Marks - The entry is entirely offensive or objectionable.

  • 5 Marks - The entry offers very little entertainment. Large portions of the entry are extraneous, unnecessary, or boring.

  • 10 Marks - I personally disliked the entry, but I am aware that the entry is not objectively bad.

  • 15 Marks - The entry does not inspire any strong opinion in me.

  • 20 Marks - The entry is satisfying, but may lack sufficient elements that would otherwise make it a complete work. There are passages that I enjoyed, but it is lacking as a whole. I would gladly read pieces of this quality if a stranger asked me for their opinion of something they had written.

  • 25 Marks - The entry is perfection, a complete work that I would pay money to read. The narrative, characters, themes etc. complement one another without being overtly forced, with the work instilling emotions or feelings within me. I felt dismayed at having to stop reading this entry. I would beg the author to enter next year's writing competition if they do not show an interest.

    Member of BlackForest Studios
    Co-creator of Silent Evil (4.6) Voted Best Multiplayer Scenario of 2009 (Most Fave'd Multiplayer Scenario)
    and The Seas of Egressa (4.8) Voted Best Multiplayer Scenario of 2010
    "Popey just hates everywhere." - Chocolate Jesus, on my fear of Romanian organ-traffickers
    "Hooray for Dear Leader-Comrade-Generalissimo-Presidente-Lord Protector Popey!" - Lord Sipia, on my benevolent, iron-fisted rule
    "You're not Popeychops; you don't get to physics." - Moff, in response to a clumsy muon simile
  • posted 01-02-16 08:51 PM CT (US)     25 / 262  
    If I do a "novelization" of Papers, Please, can I be graded in Marx instead? <_<

    Purveyor of the Poi | Deliverer of Desu | Weeaboo Brony Conserative - The Ultimate Foe to the Internet
    Lord Sipia: "THIS IS WHAT HAPPENS WHEN SIPPY IS EXCLUDED! EVERYBODY LOSES THEIR SANITY" | Also Lord Sipia: "...Of course. Prepare the butter."
    Hi, I'm Kongou! Are you my admiral?
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