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posted 01-01-15 01:31 PM CT (US)   

Congratulations to RedhandedJill, Winner of the AoKH Writing Competition 2015!



Previous Writing Competitions:

CarolKarine: 2013
Leif Ericson: 2012
sly_guy: 2010
Scud: 2008



Now that the mistletoe has made its way into the bin, the Christmas tree has gone back into the attic, and all the New Year's Champagne has been consumed, what is left to fill the empty hours?

Of course, we all have terribly busy lives of work, friendship, and study, yet sometimes we wish for a way to procrastinate from it, as I am now. And so, as the snow that clads our locales melts away, my thoughts wander to a faraway land, of wizards and elves, where I can tell a story of companionship, adventure, and peril.

I imagine many of you have stories of your own. This Competition is an opportunity to share them with the community.

Whether you prefer prose or poetry, realism or fantasy, modern or historical, dramatic or humorous, we accept them all. So, this is the perfect opportunity for all of you budding storytellers to flex your writing muscles and exercise your creative side, for a Custom Title will be awarded for first place! Additional prizes include three mystery strategy games!

Rules:

What's a competition without rules? Despite your groaning, feast your eyes over these rules below, because you don't want to write a 175 page novel and realise it won't be accepted.

Your entry must not exceed 10,000 words – if you get up to 10001, you can probably find a sentence to rephrase. No preference will be given for entries of any length: they will be judged for their consistent merit.

Your entry must be written in the English language.

Your entry must be a work of fiction; novellas, short stories, prose, poetry or screenplays. Any fictional entry will be accepted. However, articles, essays and so forth will not be accepted.

Your entry must be sent in before March 15th, which means any time during or before March 14th. Please send your entries to Popeychops@heavengames.com

Once you have sent your entry, you will have no chance to edit it further – it is considered final. Make sure you’re happy with it before you send it in.

Your entry must be entirely your own work – no team entries, no cooperation between two writers, etc. It is permitted to use real or existing characters or events, but your own work must be the full scope of your entry.

Your entry must be submitted in one of the following digital formats: [.doc, .docx, .txt, .pdf]
Alternatively, you may send it as the body of an email to Popeychops@heavengames.com.

The content of your entry must obey the CoC.

The Judges' interpretation of the rules is final.

Judging:

The competition has three judges who will award a maximum of 50 points to each story; up to 25 for Technical Proficiency, and up to 25 for Literary Content. The entries will be judged by myself, Lief Ericson, and Mr Wednesday. The winning entry will be the one with the highest combined score from all three judges. In the event of a tie, the award will be shared between the winning entries.

"Technical Proficiency" is the assessment of your ability to write in the English language. The main areas that will be judged will be how well your entry is structured, the literary technique displayed, the use of language for effect, characterisation, thematic development and others. You will be marked down for spelling and grammatical errors (unless of course it is used as colloquialism during dialogue), so be sure to check your entries thoroughly for any errors.

"Literary Content" will be the content of the entry itself, and to be blunt - did the judges like it? Was your entry satisfying, was the plot developed, or was the dialogue wooden with the characters lifeless? It may be good writing a well thought out and technical piece of prose, but if it isn't interesting to the judges you are shooting yourself in the foot.

If you ask the judges nicely, they may write an extended critique of your work! Now that you know what to do and what to expect, it's time to let the creative juices flow! Good luck and have fun writing!

Entrants:

PopeyMattLeif
AuthorEntryTechnical ProficiencyLiterary ContentTechnical ProficiencyLiterary ContentTechnical ProficiencyLiterary ContentTOTAL
RedHandedJillThe Call of My Dark World222519241719126
Lord BasseThe Castle on Amerun Hill191821221917116
The Gingerdead ManThe End of Clocks181724201918116
CarolKarineSignal to the Noise212318181519114
MoffUntitled201619192212108
LildbehrThe Shapeshifter's Son121076161970
VinylUntitled105133171462


Dropped out:

Jan dc
Mithril Knight
Seonid
Erskine Ravel
Arnas
Mash
Dementor561
Gunkanchud
ax_man1
AsyDRabbit
Little Fighter 2

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and The Seas of Egressa (4.8) Voted Best Multiplayer Scenario of 2010
"Popey just hates everywhere." - Chocolate Jesus, on my fear of Romanian organ-traffickers
"Hooray for Dear Leader-Comrade-Generalissimo-Presidente-Lord Protector Popey!" - Lord Sipia, on my benevolent, iron-fisted rule
"You're not Popeychops; you don't get to physics." - Moff, in response to a clumsy muon simile

[This message has been edited by Popeychops (edited 03-27-2015 @ 01:51 PM).]

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posted 01-01-15 03:28 PM CT (US)     1 / 350  
Sign me up!

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posted 01-01-15 03:58 PM CT (US)     2 / 350  
I'm in.

Is there a theme?

Edit: will oxford commas be marked off ? I refuse to leave them out.

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[This message has been edited by CarolKarine (edited 01-01-2015 @ 04:07 PM).]

posted 01-01-15 08:48 PM CT (US)     3 / 350  
There're some specific instances where an Oxford comma is absolutely required, but it's not the end of the world if you don't use one where it's not required (and making grammar nazis cry is fun).

ax_man1

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posted 01-02-15 05:16 AM CT (US)     4 / 350  
Put me down as a possible entrant. This term is going to be really busy for me so I don't know if I'll have time to write.

"Then ready yourself Peter Pan, for I am Red Handed Jill"
posted 01-02-15 06:31 AM CT (US)     5 / 350  
I went to the party with the strippers, George Washington and Abraham Lincoln.

An oxford comma would fix that.

Proud owner of Splash Splash XLIV: Leave it there for someone to find, Which is on record for being the fastest thread to reach 2500 posts - which was completed in 28 hours and 17 minutes, from start to finish!
Yeah, the republican party is pretty much one big schizophrenic ball of contradictions nowadays. - Ax_man1
double post for milestone, then relentlessly bash on the community for the hell of it... stay classy thymole. - Lurker
posted 01-02-15 07:38 AM CT (US)     6 / 350  
You will be marked down for spelling and grammatical errors
So just don't make any grammatical errors, CK.

Member of BlackForest Studios
Co-creator of Silent Evil (4.6) Voted Best Multiplayer Scenario of 2009 (Most Fave'd Multiplayer Scenario)
and The Seas of Egressa (4.8) Voted Best Multiplayer Scenario of 2010
"Popey just hates everywhere." - Chocolate Jesus, on my fear of Romanian organ-traffickers
"Hooray for Dear Leader-Comrade-Generalissimo-Presidente-Lord Protector Popey!" - Lord Sipia, on my benevolent, iron-fisted rule
"You're not Popeychops; you don't get to physics." - Moff, in response to a clumsy muon simile
posted 01-02-15 09:12 AM CT (US)     7 / 350  
Edit: will oxford commas be marked off ? I refuse to leave them out.
To my knowledge, including them is the grammatically correct choice. I mean there's a little debate over the topic but any university professor I've ever had would have ripped me to shreds for not including them. The exception for me so far has been in French, where you don't include them, but I doubt anyone's writing their story in French

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posted 01-02-15 09:25 AM CT (US)     8 / 350  
I doubt anyone's writing their story in French
That reminds me to state that entries must be written in English

Member of BlackForest Studios
Co-creator of Silent Evil (4.6) Voted Best Multiplayer Scenario of 2009 (Most Fave'd Multiplayer Scenario)
and The Seas of Egressa (4.8) Voted Best Multiplayer Scenario of 2010
"Popey just hates everywhere." - Chocolate Jesus, on my fear of Romanian organ-traffickers
"Hooray for Dear Leader-Comrade-Generalissimo-Presidente-Lord Protector Popey!" - Lord Sipia, on my benevolent, iron-fisted rule
"You're not Popeychops; you don't get to physics." - Moff, in response to a clumsy muon simile
posted 01-02-15 09:28 AM CT (US)     9 / 350  
I'm asking if omitting or including oxford commas constitutes an infraction of that rule.

Proud owner of Splash Splash XLIV: Leave it there for someone to find, Which is on record for being the fastest thread to reach 2500 posts - which was completed in 28 hours and 17 minutes, from start to finish!
Yeah, the republican party is pretty much one big schizophrenic ball of contradictions nowadays. - Ax_man1
double post for milestone, then relentlessly bash on the community for the hell of it... stay classy thymole. - Lurker
posted 01-02-15 09:32 AM CT (US)     10 / 350  
I'm in. I wonder how fast can I write 10000 words.

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posted 01-02-15 09:33 AM CT (US)     11 / 350  
Whether you prefer prose or poetry, realism or fantasy, modern or historical, dramatic or humorous, we accept them all.
Is erotic fiction permitted?


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posted 01-02-15 09:57 AM CT (US)     12 / 350  
I don't think cloppfics will be allowed Moff, so no.

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posted 01-02-15 10:03 AM CT (US)     13 / 350  
...You give me mortal insult, sirrah. Besides, I quote Tom Lehrer's wisdom: When correctly viewed, everything is lewd.

Also, I've been accused--rather... acclaimed--of writing "naval porn." Not to be confused with Top Gun slashfic.

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Lord Sipia: "THIS IS WHAT HAPPENS WHEN SIPPY IS EXCLUDED! EVERYBODY LOSES THEIR SANITY" | Also Lord Sipia: "...Of course. Prepare the butter."
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posted 01-02-15 10:40 AM CT (US)     14 / 350  
I'm still mentally scarred from that wall of text you wrote this summer, Moff

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[This message has been edited by HockeySam18 (edited 01-02-2015 @ 10:41 AM).]

posted 01-02-15 11:07 AM CT (US)     15 / 350  
...That hardly narrows it down.

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Lord Sipia: "THIS IS WHAT HAPPENS WHEN SIPPY IS EXCLUDED! EVERYBODY LOSES THEIR SANITY" | Also Lord Sipia: "...Of course. Prepare the butter."
Hi, I'm Kongou! Are you my admiral?
posted 01-02-15 12:04 PM CT (US)     16 / 350  
Is erotic fiction permitted?
All entries will be posted in this thread, so it has to obey the CoC.

Member of BlackForest Studios
Co-creator of Silent Evil (4.6) Voted Best Multiplayer Scenario of 2009 (Most Fave'd Multiplayer Scenario)
and The Seas of Egressa (4.8) Voted Best Multiplayer Scenario of 2010
"Popey just hates everywhere." - Chocolate Jesus, on my fear of Romanian organ-traffickers
"Hooray for Dear Leader-Comrade-Generalissimo-Presidente-Lord Protector Popey!" - Lord Sipia, on my benevolent, iron-fisted rule
"You're not Popeychops; you don't get to physics." - Moff, in response to a clumsy muon simile
posted 01-02-15 12:11 PM CT (US)     17 / 350  
Hmmph. Well, count me in.

I'll try not to be erotic, but I am not responsible for any strange triggers it may hit. <_<

Purveyor of the Poi | Deliverer of Desu
Lord Sipia: "THIS IS WHAT HAPPENS WHEN SIPPY IS EXCLUDED! EVERYBODY LOSES THEIR SANITY" | Also Lord Sipia: "...Of course. Prepare the butter."
Hi, I'm Kongou! Are you my admiral?
posted 01-02-15 12:59 PM CT (US)     18 / 350  
Bear in mind the text describing "Literary Content"...

Member of BlackForest Studios
Co-creator of Silent Evil (4.6) Voted Best Multiplayer Scenario of 2009 (Most Fave'd Multiplayer Scenario)
and The Seas of Egressa (4.8) Voted Best Multiplayer Scenario of 2010
"Popey just hates everywhere." - Chocolate Jesus, on my fear of Romanian organ-traffickers
"Hooray for Dear Leader-Comrade-Generalissimo-Presidente-Lord Protector Popey!" - Lord Sipia, on my benevolent, iron-fisted rule
"You're not Popeychops; you don't get to physics." - Moff, in response to a clumsy muon simile
posted 01-02-15 02:04 PM CT (US)     19 / 350  
I'm asking if omitting or including oxford commas constitutes an infraction of that rule.
Personally, I see this as a grammatical question that has no clear consensus. I've seen it go both ways. As a judge, I won't count down on technical proficiency for this issue unless the meaning of the sentence is unclear. Popey of course can add his input.

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posted 01-02-15 04:14 PM CT (US)     20 / 350  
I don't consider it to be grammatically incorrect.

Just don't use the Oxford apostrophe.

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Co-creator of Silent Evil (4.6) Voted Best Multiplayer Scenario of 2009 (Most Fave'd Multiplayer Scenario)
and The Seas of Egressa (4.8) Voted Best Multiplayer Scenario of 2010
"Popey just hates everywhere." - Chocolate Jesus, on my fear of Romanian organ-traffickers
"Hooray for Dear Leader-Comrade-Generalissimo-Presidente-Lord Protector Popey!" - Lord Sipia, on my benevolent, iron-fisted rule
"You're not Popeychops; you don't get to physics." - Moff, in response to a clumsy muon simile
posted 01-02-15 04:57 PM CT (US)     21 / 350  
I might give this a shot although I'm no a writer at all and have very little experience with writing :P.

[This message has been edited by Jan dc (edited 01-02-2015 @ 05:00 PM).]

posted 01-02-15 06:04 PM CT (US)     22 / 350  
Having seen your entry so far, I think you should definitely give it a shot

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posted 01-02-15 06:39 PM CT (US)     23 / 350  
That reminds me to state that entries must be written in English
When you say "English", do you mean modern English only, or could I write a story in say, Middle English?

ax_man1

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posted 01-03-15 10:39 AM CT (US)     24 / 350  
How about Gungan Pidgin Basic?

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posted 01-03-15 05:02 PM CT (US)     25 / 350  
Alright, third competition in a row that I'm entering. How will this end I wonder. Sign me up.

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